At the end of last month, Maya (my 10 month old) and I went to the Wheeler Centre to present the poetry prizes for the bi-ennual poetry competition of the Society of Women Writers. I blogged here several months ago about how difficult the competition was to judge...and it didn’t get any easier. I ended up with about eight poems which I read over and over again to ascertain the three places, and even then I ended up with a first, a second and two highly commendeds.
The competition was judged blind, so I was a little surprised to find out that I’d given first and second place to the same poet for the astonishingly raw poems Milk and Scar. The author unexpectedly turned out to be one Lorraine McGuigan, who at the prize giving ceremony gave me a copy of her book Wings of The Same Bird. The winner of IP Picks 2009 Best Poetry Award. The book is fast becoming one of my favourites. The two highly commended places went to Maree Silver for her haunting landscape poem Corner Country and Meryl Tobin for the poem Athens.
When I was initially asked to judge the poetry competition, I undertook to give feedback on every single poem. I know this sounds mad. After all, the competition guidelines specified that the judge’s decision was final and no correspondence would be entered into. And perhaps I was voluntarily opening my judging decision up for scrutiny, but I didn’t much care. My rational was that writing competitions are useless to the 97% of people who don’t get a place. You enter the writing and have no idea how, or if, you went wrong. Perhaps you were in the top four, and there were simply three poems the judge considered ‘better’ than yours, or maybe most of your poem was fantastic but the last line was so cringingly cliché that it ruined the whole experience.
Of course, once I started writing a one sentence comment on each poem, one thing led to another and I ended up writing each poet a report of several paragraphs in order to properly explain myself and provide feedback which will hopefully go on to be some kind of use.
Judging the competition taught me so much about what never believed I knew about poetry.
Some of the images from these poems still visit me in my sleep.
Now that is poetry.
Thanks to SWA for the use of the photograph, thanks to my daughter Maya Lou for behaving with suitable decorum throughout the judging speech and 'ceremony' .
I know how you must have felt afterward. I correct about 120 essays in a two week period, 10 times in a 10 month period. Every paper has comments and I provide the opportunity to rewrite.
ReplyDeleteYou are the queen bee of judges - wouldn't it be great if everyone did what you did (but it must have been a very difficult job) - it would be a great way to learn more about poetry, as you have to really understand each poem to judge fairly.
ReplyDeleteHi Ted, would that there were more educators like you!
ReplyDeleteGabrielle - I reckon all competitions should be like that - makes things more transparent and means all entrants get some feedback.
That is such a wonderful thing to do, and I'm sure the God / Goddess / Gil of your choice will smile beneficently upon you. True, most competitions (and submissions) are great chasms in which you throw your work but never know if you were close, way off, too similar in tone to others or just plain missed the point. I'm sure yours was a mammoth task and probably the only reward you'll receive is to have to judge more competitions! Your dedication to poetry is boundless, I know personally the assistance you've provided to me has been invaluable.
ReplyDeleteAh Mark, my very own Gil looking down at me from the spoken word afterlife - a thought worthy of a slam poem :) And thanks for your kind words. I'm not quite the poetry martyr, but I like that I might have managed to help you in some small way x
ReplyDeleteWill the winning poems be published somewhere?
ReplyDeleteNot sure Cat, but I did mention that I thought the poems warranted an anthology, so who knows...
ReplyDeletethat is great of you Maxine,
ReplyDeletei have never entered one of those cause i figured out it is to give my little money for a competition which most highly likely i will never win. i prefer to buy a collection or a magazine for that..
if i would have known you would be there. well.. i think it is great what you did..
I think that's a good philosophy, Dhyan...I rarely enter competitions and at times the entry fee is so high it's almost exploitative. Buying a collection or mag is a great option.
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